Richards

This story was actually enjoyable. The use of the monitor interrupting throughout the essay, really made me as a reader feel like one existed. Also the use of it repeatedly even at the end gave the story more of a picture by reiterating it's existence so many times. One problem I would have had in the narrator's place is the constant need to repeat everything you say. I have problems with most people who ask me to repeat myself once, let alone have to deal with that kind of questioning every few minutes. I am also a tad curious about one of the jokes in the essay. "'No flies on you, baby' 'No ma'am, they done shit and flew.'" I don't get it. Someone please explain this it's starting to irk me.